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Enough is Enough -Chapter 3- by Amaya-Hikari Enough is Enough -Chapter 3- by Amaya-Hikari

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Sorry for kinda stopping it randomly, but like I said in the last chapter, I want it be no more than 3 thousand words and this is already over 3,600 words. I hope you guys donít mind. I was actually thinking about discontinuing this because I donít have time to write new chapters on time, but to discontinue after 3 chapters would be stupid. Iím the kinda person who likes to finish what I start, so Imma keep this going until the end. :D And I'm still hesitant about that download button. ._. Sooooo, the main point of this chapter was to show that this kinda stuff happens outside of school too. It was actually about a year ago (Note: I was homeschooled at the time) and some kids were bothering me at a football game. But my mom was there, so she kinda saved me. But it kinda bothers me that even when Iím out of school, I still get harassed. lol Anywho, Iíve got chapter 1 of ďYogurtĒ up, so go check it out. Iíve also been very busy because I started a Laura Bailey fan club and Iím looking for members. If youíre a fan of Laura Bailey, come join. ;D I kinda got the idea of this chapter because my mom LOVES to plan beach trips and theyíre pretty fun. :D Anyway, itís storming outside so Iím gonna shut off my laptop.

(c) Square Enix
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:iconmadam-hell:
This is such an amazing story so far! It brings a new scope on what Claires and Serahs life could have been like. You write just enough so it doesn't seem like the chapter is short but it still keeps the reader guessing.
I haven't found a story quite like this one and I love it! It is completely original and all your own and it just has this... spark? It makes you feel like you just want to keep reading. Much like your other story Yogurt.
I love how you still kept some of Lightnings anger and how she thinks with her fists rather than her head.
Serah is also still the one that reminds Claire on what is right and wrong but still manages to be the fun sister she is.
All in all this is such a wonderful story and I hope you choose to complete it!
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Aww... D; I hope for lots of moogle here! And stopping just in the middle! So interest catching! ;P I wanna read more...Kupo...
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:iconlightningfarron165:
Love these kind of stories! Please write the new chapter as fast as you can ^-^
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Amaya-Hikari Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! And I have a thing for High school fics too. XD :D
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:iconthao2696:
umm. sorry, but what story is this...?
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Amaya-Hikari Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Enough is Enough, you can find chapter one on my profile. :)
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:iconlightningfarron165:
I just canīt hate these kind of stories T-T
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